Today we re-filmed a section of the opening of our film, where the woman storms out of the doctors office, in a violent rage. We also re-filmed the section where she is rummaging through the war photos and she rips up the child photo. This indicates she is in a manic state and is angry and troubled by the image of the young child.
We decided to re film it as there was an issue with continuity, as it appeared that the woman changed clothes between each shot. We also got feedback back it was not clear that the woman was strongly effected by these images and her past as a war photographer. With the re filming we hoped to add more shots showing both the womans face and the photos; showing her reactions to the them and her rage as she rips one to pieces. We also wanted to add an additional shot showing her grief and the begining of her breakdown:
FEEDBACK: state what feedback prompted you to re-film this and what you tried to achieve the second time around.
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