CONSTRUCTION: FEEDBACK ON OUR FILM OPENING

• The filming is successful with different camera movement.
• The narrative is clear due to the successful editing.
• The music went well with the filming to create suspense.

The points which she suggested we improved were:

• Add sound effects of guns over the war photography to create a better sense of trauma.
•  Adding in a scene with the toy doll and the little girl so at the end we know the girl is in danger as the doll is on the barbed wire.

We also got other feedback from other audiences who said good points were:

• We had clear thriller codes in our opening which create suspense, enigma and tension
• The editing is successful at creating a sense of anxiety.

The feedback given to improve were:

• Decrease the brightness of the red during the park scene
• Adding a voice over, which we were planning on adding anyway to improve the narrative and help the audience to understand better. 

I have made a PREZI to go into deeper understanding of what we need to improve and how we are going to fix this criticism.